A plug for a new blog I am following
The Brick Brothers, a blog created by my two boys
Click the above link to read my adventure with Sam, Little B and a ????
Sam and Little B
Thank you for reading and taking time to hop over to the boys blog.
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Just wanted to say that the blog is a great way for the boys to develop their writing skills, isn't it! Excellent job on the chipmunk story! I would only make one suggestion, and that would be that he would put in an extra line space every few sentences. Makes it easier to read. Technically, he doesn't need to because it is all one topic and makes a great paragraph, so he was correct in doing it that way. But for blogging, it just makes it easier to read through with an extra line space now and then - like I should have done with this way-too-long comment. lol
ReplyDeleteNice story. It was just a little hard to read without the spaces..
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